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Emo Forums » Emo Poetry (Reply)

Emo Pictures - CyanideCinderella
CyanideCinderella
Posts: 282
its hard to do but you gotta do one day Aug 03 2009, 08:12 AM
its hard to turn away When you have to close your eyes first thats something you dont wanna do Cuz it makes you think the worst Its hard to let go when you always have to say goodbye which you dont wanna do cuz you know you'll cry Its hard to accept accept the things you deny but you cant smile forever when we all know its a lie Its never healthy to pretend when you moan about how nothings real open your eyes be afraid now you know how i feel

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Deleted User
Aug 03 2009, 10:46 AM
Gahh... This is hard to read because you fail at spelling... Cause* IT'S SPELLED CAUSE!!! Gawd.. And technically it is Because but I don't think I will get into that. What's next.. apostrophes... You fail with these too. Honestly how hard is it to hit the ' key? Now what was this piece of crap... ERM Poem about?
Emo Pictures - CyanideCinderella
CyanideCinderella
Posts: 282
Aug 03 2009, 02:21 PM
dude fine thats your opinion. And so what my grammar is shizz. I write what i feel and what i think so if its crap to you fine i cant change that it just made me feel better to get it out. :(
DoctorHappyPHD
Posts: 184
Aug 03 2009, 02:51 PM
Your poem is poser crap to be quite honest. Again if you were really emo you would have killed yourself by now. I will ABSOLUTELY guarantee you did not draw ANY real life experiences into this poem. Please don't post shit in my website thank you very much.
Emo Pictures - Vybz
Vybz
Posts: 1466
Aug 03 2009, 04:38 PM
Lovely .. nice poetry... i am glad to hear that you write what you feel ... i do the same keep up the good work hun. dnt mind the haters
DoctorHappyPHD
Posts: 184
Aug 03 2009, 05:56 PM
Haters? I support the emo culture beyond belief, I may seem extreme in my ways but I can assure you I support you guys one hundred percent. I mean for Anti-Christ's sake who doesn't like cutting themselves and crying over spilt milk?
EmoJesus
Posts: 46
Aug 03 2009, 06:03 PM
The doctor is not a hater at all, you dumb fucking jerk offs. I, on the other hand am. Why? Because you're all a bunch of stupid little fuckers! You can't even tell who hates you and who doesn't, yet alone tell how fucking pathetic you are! The poem was pathetic, you stupid little bitch. Go cut yourself over it. You fucking people are as talentless as you fucking pathetic. Little cunts. Fuck off and cut yourselves.
Emo Pictures - CyanideCinderella
CyanideCinderella
Posts: 282
Aug 04 2009, 01:06 AM
Guys for fuck sake i wrote a poem that some people dont like so what theres no need to give me shit all you had to say was this is crap.. And you guyys make us sound exactly how chavs, etc make us out to be. emo does not mean cutting, crying and being depressive it was about music, passion and expressing yourself on paper. And its not emo's that cut themselves, people with issuses and shit lives cut themselves. And if i was a true emo i would of killed myself by now what was that about. Your not dead yet are you. yes i cut myself and yes ive been suicidal but who fucking hasnt.i dont do it because im an emo ffs. Stop making cutting sound like a fucking fashion statement!
DoctorHappyPHD
Posts: 184
Aug 04 2009, 03:22 AM
See you fit the stereotype exactly you are not helping your case at all. I mean honest to the Unholy one himself you simply throw all the emos under the bus. Please when you want to talk make sure something intelligent comes out of your mouth.
Emo Pictures - xXxChrisJWxXx
xXxChrisJWxXx
Posts: 1545
Aug 04 2009, 09:10 AM
Hun I love the work, you done well and I can't wait if you do more. Can I just say though from what I've seen "DoctorHappyPHD" "EmoJesus" & "HappyTank" are emo haters, they are vial, vulgar, egotistical, pretentious, self opinionated, infantile and so much more which I can not bring myself to say in a public place. In short ignore them hun, be proud of your work. I am.
Emo Pictures - xXeMoRaCeRXx
xXeMoRaCeRXx
Posts: 18353
Aug 04 2009, 10:18 AM
IT'S SPELLED CAUSE! - why do people mock other people's grammer and spelling when they are awful themselves. This poem isn't bad, but I prefer the songs lyrics you have posted.
DoctorHappyPHD
Posts: 184
Aug 04 2009, 01:49 PM
Hey chris...nice job using Big words. You obviously passed the fourth grade! I hope your teacher is proud of you and gave you a gold star today. Keep on working with your grammar and words and one day you might be able to read a big boy book.
Emo Pictures - CyanideCinderella
CyanideCinderella
Posts: 282
Aug 04 2009, 01:52 PM
Where the fuck to get off being a dickhead to everyone! Get a life mann!
DoctorHappyPHD
Posts: 184
Aug 04 2009, 01:56 PM
Where the fuck do you get off..* (Your sentence was grammatically lacking) Cyanide my heart is yours forever if you want we can cut our wrists together and make a blood-bondage. Love you sweetie ^>^
Emo Pictures - CyanideCinderella
CyanideCinderella
Posts: 282
Aug 04 2009, 02:05 PM
Wtf? Im fed up of people telling me about my shit grammar i dont care. i write and you all understand what im saying so it doesnt really matter! And treat me like shit and my mates like shit because of a poem, grammar and big words. Honestly i find you extremely fucking patranising Just fucking give it a break!
DoctorHappyPHD
Posts: 184
Aug 04 2009, 02:07 PM
OMG you can use big words too sweetie that's great! I guess you just finished fourth grade as well. Well I hope you know that your my life and everything revolves around you. Pick you up at six mmkay?
Emo Pictures - CyanideCinderella
CyanideCinderella
Posts: 282
Aug 04 2009, 02:13 PM
dude your driving me insane.
DoctorHappyPHD
Posts: 184
Aug 04 2009, 02:17 PM
Yeah...Driving you insane with love and tenderness!
Emo Pictures - CyanideCinderella
CyanideCinderella
Posts: 282
Aug 04 2009, 02:49 PM
I think they have certain drugs for your kinda problem
DoctorHappyPHD
Posts: 184
Aug 04 2009, 02:51 PM
Awww come on baby cakes, don't be like that :). i just want to huggle with you.
Emo Pictures - CyanideCinderella
CyanideCinderella
Posts: 282
Aug 04 2009, 02:55 PM
Again. Your a patranising bastard. Get a life. And stop annoying mine.

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