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xXeMoRaCeRXx
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Dead Inside Jun 17 2008, 02:49 PM

Never has anyone been so good to me to loose you in an instant had my heart ripped at the seams. Picking up the pieces that are trampled on the floor i might aswell just leave it it can not be broken more Beaten down with pressure no way to bring me up too many try to comfort me then end up giving up Whats the point in living if your already dead inside just a corpse thats walking leading no other life The spirit that is around is never coming back it's lost all intention the courage that it lacked The memory is still there nothing is forgotten Lie there with the pain sinking to the bottom Some memories were good but theres the outcast of the bad My fingertips failed to clench the thing that I once had.

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Tantra_B
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Jun 20 2008, 05:09 AM

Hmm who this by?

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Tantra_B
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Jun 20 2008, 12:49 PM

It's not too bad actually. Have any other poems you've done? It's very, bleak this isn't it? But it's good :]

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poetryxisxmyxsheild
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Jul 01 2008, 10:02 AM

i really really like this write

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Aug 24 2008, 03:40 PM

I like this one....it's very good X_x

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bLoOdStAiN
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Nov 15 2008, 03:53 AM

. . . .+++++. . . . this poetry is so outstanding!!!!!!!!!!!! hell yeahhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!............

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