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naira666
Posts: 132

-breakup Nov 18 2008, 07:31 AM

i feel so dim for loving him falling for his trap it was a whole load of crap i knew it was too good to be true the second time he said we were through my heart literally broke i couldnt believe it was a joke the things we did made me realise im not a kid i feel so cheap and used if my family knew, i'd be bruised

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victhevamp
Posts: 2305

Nov 18 2008, 11:59 AM

oooo i didnt see that last line coming, very good x

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naira666
Posts: 132

Nov 19 2008, 07:27 AM

lol yup thanks :)

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Pagan
Posts: 606

Dec 12 2008, 01:47 PM

wow thats a really goood poem really good last line well done shame bout the guy though. Pagan

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Coldsoul
Posts: 47

Jan 12 2009, 02:07 AM

This was a very strong and awesome poem!

Loved it <3

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