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StaticBlissInhevanea
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somethin i wrote Feb 20 2009, 06:51 PM

different now- accoustic/piano

can this really be/ i'm left to
watch the stars alone/ to feel
nothing but lonelyness at night/
it's different now without you by
my side/ only to know i'm alone/

can you heal all these open wounds/
and make the pain
fade away/

so now time is all i got/ till my
heart brakes again/ all i ever wanted/
was for you to see the pain/ that you push
on my heart/ with those words you
breathed on me/

can i heal all these open wounds
and push the pain
far away/

i never ment to hurt you(all my words die)
they worked so deep inside of you/
i never ment to kill you(and my heart died)
it turned to stone and fell apart/

can you heal the wounds!?
replace all the tears/
can i heal all your wounds!?
replace all your tears/

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Feb 23 2009, 08:01 AM

thats really nice

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emo_ray
Posts: 4

Feb 23 2009, 02:03 PM

hey i really like that alot so i think that you should keep up da good work!!!:D

-maggi!♥

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