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Emo Forums » Emo Poetry (Reply)

-Emo_Girl-
Posts: 8
From You To Me... May 09 2009, 07:30 AM

Gareth (bf) doesn't have a soemo account, so I thought I'd upload this for him, as he says he isn't good at writing poetry, and I was hoping you guys could help me prove him wrong? Thanks =)

Whenever I'm down in a world of darkness
I want to hold you close to me
And whenever I kiss you
A warm feeling travels through me
Lighting my world like the sun
The love you give me travels through me
Keeping me going and alive
Giving me the smile I've never had
Making my heart beat like it's never done before

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Emo Pictures - xXeMoRaCeRXx
xXeMoRaCeRXx
Posts: 18353
May 10 2009, 01:21 PM
Well I certainly like it. Same goes for the last poems you uploaded.
Emo Pictures - xXxChrisJWxXx
xXxChrisJWxXx
Posts: 1545
May 10 2009, 02:07 PM
Love your work hun
Just_About_Done
Posts: 5
May 12 2009, 03:32 PM
well he is good at poetry. i liked it

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