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xXxChrisJWxXx
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END IT May 19 2009, 11:34 AM

My heart grows tired with weary eyes I am coming to my eternal demise Death approaches me with such hollow eyes he didn't even try to look in disguise the eternal sorrow of my foreboding heart that kiss i thought would be my last i swore to myself i'd never go fast i swore to myself i'll always come last (and I have) the troubles of my blood stained soul lost forever as I wander alone in a mist of fear, & terror, & fright& i will always be the last to pick a fight my heart is forever yours my eternal beauty i've now lost it all so please just shoot me the love i've grown with passion unknown forever to be stone dead cold

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x_BlindxXxtacy_x
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May 20 2009, 04:35 AM

Dude thats really good.

:)

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xXxChrisJWxXx
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May 20 2009, 06:05 AM

thanks hun

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May 23 2009, 12:15 PM

your so bright and talanted hun.

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xXxChrisJWxXx
Posts: 1545

May 23 2009, 01:49 PM

no, its just a story with a rhyming word at the end of each line, a separate focus in each stanza (or at least try to)

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Vybz
Posts: 1466

May 24 2009, 02:09 PM

deep man.. just deep.. if only i could be as deep as u .. you are good, keep writing poetry that touches  those who read 

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xXxChrisJWxXx
Posts: 1545

May 24 2009, 02:54 PM

thanks hun but its not gd

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