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You misunderstood thrown away from the world Lost a lights in front of you Even without you world goes on You will be fade away by the illusion Keep your eyes ahead of you There's a way Nobody can get in your way Wake up, wake up Don't be Afraid, by Dexcore

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Emo Pictures - x_MsAngelOfDeath_x
x_MsAngelOfDeath_x
Posts: 16
Visit in the Night: A dream becomes reality May 22 2009, 04:49 PM

Groping the floor, unable to raise


waiting, dreading an uneventful surprise


Death whispers into my bleeding ear


"You know that's a lie. Death you do not fear"


I grin- yes! I grin at his face


"I do not fear death, I but know my place"


He kneels beside me, a curious bete noir


With his bone hands, yanked me back by the hair


Nonchalant I wait and I watch well


"Dear Dark, girl is your rightful place hell?"


A scythe gleams in his hand that forcfully lessens


The pain in the heart of mindless oppresion


He smirks, a smirk of submission


As he brings the blade towards my neck to complete his mission


 


I scream awake from the vision of Death


I pause a moment to catch my breath


A dream, a dream! All but a dream!


No, I am awake now, things are as they seem


But all in the dream was not deceitful


True- life for me was never restful


I am what he said, unafraid to die


I smile, taking the oppurtunity to sigh


Time to rest, to rest for real


My lips curl, a smile around a cold barrel of steel.




 

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Emo Pictures - xXxChrisJWxXx
xXxChrisJWxXx
Posts: 1545
May 23 2009, 03:22 AM
love the poem hun, great work
Emo Pictures - x_MsAngelOfDeath_x
x_MsAngelOfDeath_x
Posts: 16
May 23 2009, 07:53 AM
Thanks darling. I want to be a writer so when I get feedback like that, it makes me happy.
Emo Pictures - xXxChrisJWxXx
xXxChrisJWxXx
Posts: 1545
May 23 2009, 08:08 AM
well good luck with that ambition too hun, you can probably do it if you can find a publisher x
Emo Pictures - xXeMoRaCeRXx
xXeMoRaCeRXx
Posts: 18335
May 23 2009, 11:43 AM
Can't believe how many good poets we have on here already!
Emo Pictures - xXxChrisJWxXx
xXxChrisJWxXx
Posts: 1545
May 23 2009, 11:46 AM
Poetry is the window to the soul
Emo Pictures - x_MsAngelOfDeath_x
x_MsAngelOfDeath_x
Posts: 16
May 23 2009, 07:04 PM

Wow. I appreciate that you like it.

Im not really as good as I want to be

Emo Pictures - xXxChrisJWxXx
xXxChrisJWxXx
Posts: 1545
May 24 2009, 03:15 AM
just keep trying hun, this one is great, I think you dont know just how good you are x
Emo Pictures - Vybz
Vybz
Posts: 1466
May 24 2009, 02:06 PM
great poem.. u got potential! Follow your dreams!
Emo Pictures - x_MsAngelOfDeath_x
x_MsAngelOfDeath_x
Posts: 16
May 24 2009, 07:52 PM
Thank you and I will!
Emo Pictures - x_BlindxXxtacy_x
x_BlindxXxtacy_x
Posts: 12
May 26 2009, 07:43 AM
Really great!!! :] x

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