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ava
Posts: 45

the pains of love May 30 2009, 12:04 PM

we shared another kiss then u promised me forever. ur smile so inviting so i whispered "i love u". ur hands started to wonder and ur eyes grew darker, i wondered if u wud say the words too. then ur hands wrapped around me tigher and i cud nearly feel the words in ur breath. ur hands became too tight and i whispered"it hurts" and ur loving gentle smile was replaced with an evil smerk. ur lustful hands touched me as i cried "let me go". no one cud hear me no one to save me. i wondered y i had followed u so far away from home. ur words were too kind, ur lips too warmer, ur smile ttoo inviting y hadn't i seen wat was wrong. u pushed me to the ground and starting tearing my clothes. my heart began to burst and i begged for u to quit then u took my only value in life my sweet innocence.

no words can make me stop hurting

no night will i ever forget

i thought i loved u and in return i get this?

the razors cuts r not deep enough to wipe away the hurt. the blood can't wash away the pain from the places u touched.

i was urs to love and u turned against me....i will never forgive u i will never forget........

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xXxChrisJWxXx
Posts: 1545

May 30 2009, 12:28 PM

love it hun, full of passion & relation... love it

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Vybz
Posts: 1466

May 30 2009, 12:40 PM

yes you can really feel ava's poem as you read it, i agree with you on the passion andrelation bro,, just full of it

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ava
Posts: 45

Jun 02 2009, 05:19 AM

thank  guys:] i was just writing the truth.........

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rush7645
Posts: 4

Jun 25 2009, 01:45 PM

wow, your poem is very deep.. It's so sad though. :(

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