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CyanideCinderella
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I Love You. The End. Aug 04 2009, 01:05 PM

If my heart was beating It would only speak your name And I'll just keep on dreaming Until you feel the same If my heart was burning You would put it out Running to my rescue I wouldnt need to shout If my heart was crying You would wipe each tear ''Nothings gonna hurt you'' You would whisper in my ear But still things are different you are just a friend but there's nothing wrong in dreaming That I Love You. The End.

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xXxChrisJWxXx
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Aug 04 2009, 01:22 PM

brought a tear to my eye hun, I really dunno what to say. It's perfect work hun. Any chance I can publish it on my site? I love it. xoxo

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CyanideCinderella
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Aug 04 2009, 01:51 PM

Sure if you want to I didnt think it was that good, well good but not that good to put with your amazing shizzz :P x

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xXxChrisJWxXx
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Aug 04 2009, 02:23 PM

mines crap hun, what signature/ name you want on it?

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CyanideCinderella
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Aug 04 2009, 02:47 PM

*shrugs shoulders xxxx

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xXxChrisJWxXx
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Aug 05 2009, 11:27 AM

I'll put your SoEmo name, if you want your real name PM me i'll send a link when it's done

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CyanideCinderella
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Aug 05 2009, 11:37 AM

You choose: CyanideCinderella or Sonni Carpenter? (not laugh at the name)

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xXxChrisJWxXx
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Aug 05 2009, 11:41 AM

http://amateurpoetry.yolasite.com/i-love-you-the-end.php

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CyanideCinderella
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Aug 05 2009, 12:09 PM

Wow thanks :)xx You stuff is amazing chris the amount times ive read them and had to hold back the tears, you've got a gift ly x

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xXxChrisJWxXx
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Aug 05 2009, 12:17 PM

had hun, I find it harder and harder to write these days, I can to emotional writing and make a reader cry or smile but I'm not so good at poetry (or public speaking). My work was a stage I go through every couple of months. I love your work hun and they are emotional and pieces of feeling (I can't think tonight). It's just good to be able to share great work like this.

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CyanideCinderella
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Aug 05 2009, 12:29 PM

Dude i know excactly what you mean because being a lyricist is alot harder than people think and the writers block drives you insane. But its basically poetry and like poetry you just gotta wait for the insipration

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xXxChrisJWxXx
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Aug 05 2009, 12:36 PM

yeah its like writing music just drives you nuts with poems, songs, and music when you get block or start writing what you've wrote before and you then realize and have to start again

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CyanideCinderella
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Aug 05 2009, 12:48 PM

Yeah, ive actually started writing lyrics then realised it was an avril lavigne song because it was in my head at the time lol

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xXxChrisJWxXx
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Aug 05 2009, 12:55 PM

lol so easy to rewrite what you can't forget

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CyanideCinderella
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Aug 05 2009, 01:05 PM

Yeah i guess so. But the worst thingt with lyrics is you get the perfect insipration and really amazing lines when you out or far away from paper, so when you finally go to write it down you cant remember it grr! :P I make sure i have my phone so i can save it in drafts but i only get those really good lines on the off chance i forget my phone lol

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xXxChrisJWxXx
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Aug 05 2009, 01:20 PM

lol I say poetry in my head and can never remember the great stuff yet I can be saying it for like twenty minuets.

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CyanideCinderella
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Aug 05 2009, 01:33 PM

Yeah, i dunno, maybe in the future they will invent a head note pad. Actually come to think of it, thats not such a good idea :P xx

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xXxChrisJWxXx
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Aug 05 2009, 01:36 PM

Yeah could be bad

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CyanideCinderella
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Aug 05 2009, 01:48 PM

Oh well, maybe the good stuff is just too over rated :P

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xXxChrisJWxXx
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Aug 06 2009, 04:47 AM

or repeated

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CyanideCinderella
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Aug 06 2009, 10:29 AM

Or is in a totally different form

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