Emo Scene Community

Emo Forums » Emo Poetry (Reply)

Vybz
Posts: 1466

The dying ember Aug 15 2009, 06:50 PM

The love I have now is like a dying ember, in the pouring rain It’s only fuel, the strike of lightning The feelings surrounding love can be frightening and the shock you feel is not delighting For lighting may cause more flames, but the fires are of destruction and the shock unpleasant I’d rather my love fade in the pouring rain than to be aroused and awaken by the shock of lightning again To remember what was once a fire is now a flame I ask the question “why does the flame die?” Many ask the question none know why. All I know that my love is now a flame stuck in the pouring rain never to burn brightly never to shine again Pitter patter the flame dies, pitter patter the rain, tears from my eyes Pitter patter I’ve drowned my love in sorrow Pitter patter the flame is out my love knows no tomorrow Stephonz August 15th 2009 ©

Cancel

Replies

Total Forum Posts: 2

DoctorHappyPHD
Posts: 184

Aug 15 2009, 06:54 PM

I like the use of ember, very calming in a way.

Cancel

Vybz
Posts: 1466

Aug 16 2009, 06:44 AM

thanks it is calming actually... fire burning brightly, raging ,then simmering into a tiny flame, then becoming nothing down it's nice as peaceful way to describe dying emotion ^^

Cancel

Total Forum Posts: 2

Add Reply

Featured Users View More

• lisalokolile

  32/Female/NL

• xXjuli666cupidXx

  22/Female/US

• SparkSoph

  18/Female/GB

• jessicaxxxbloodXbath

  28/Female/US

• corycannibal

  20/Male/CA

• imryanstark

  25/Male/US

• Xx_SammyBoy_xX

  21/Male/US

• xblacklistMisery

  79/Male/GB