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Girls and boys in the red light district. You can watch her spin 'round a pole just like a beauty queen. Boys and girls in the red light district. Take it to my private room, I'll make you dirty boys blush. Redlight District, by Porcelain and the tramps

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Emo Pictures - x-Silent_Loudmouth-x
x-Silent_Loudmouth-x
Posts: 21
random...first go, what do you think ? Aug 26 2009, 01:51 PM
As The Sky Fades From Blue To Grey, My Mood Seems To Change The Same Way. As The Thunder Begins, I'm Punching Myself. When The Rain Falls, I Cry. But When People Die... So Do I, Inside I'm Not Sure Why... ='( ((this was random, it just came to me, i dont think im any good but oh well... tell me what you think *fingers crossed*))

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Emo Pictures - xXeMoRaCeRXx
xXeMoRaCeRXx
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Aug 26 2009, 04:10 PM
Not bad at all :]
Emo Pictures - eleventynine
eleventynine
Posts: 533
Aug 26 2009, 08:24 PM
that was good :) better than what i can do XD
Emo Pictures - Vybz
Vybz
Posts: 1466
Aug 26 2009, 08:28 PM
keep it up, the poem you posted has a lot of meaning in its simplicity and randomness ^^ grow on that and work with it. a lot of my poetry is random as well, i just come up with some stuff and I'm like where this come from lol ^^
Emo Pictures - x-Silent_Loudmouth-x
x-Silent_Loudmouth-x
Posts: 21
Aug 27 2009, 01:00 AM
yay, i wasnt talking a load of nonsense XD! thanks guys x
Emo Pictures - xXxChrisJWxXx
xXxChrisJWxXx
Posts: 1545
Aug 27 2009, 01:31 AM
great work hun! That's a brilliant first go =]
Emo Pictures - x-Silent_Loudmouth-x
x-Silent_Loudmouth-x
Posts: 21
Aug 27 2009, 03:31 AM
thank you = )

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