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x-Silent_Loudmouth-x
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random...first go, what do you think ? Aug 26 2009, 01:51 PM

As The Sky Fades From Blue To Grey, My Mood Seems To Change The Same Way. As The Thunder Begins, I'm Punching Myself. When The Rain Falls, I Cry. But When People Die... So Do I, Inside I'm Not Sure Why... ='( ((this was random, it just came to me, i dont think im any good but oh well... tell me what you think *fingers crossed*))

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xXeMoRaCeRXx
Posts: 18314

Aug 26 2009, 04:10 PM

Not bad at all :]

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eleventynine
Posts: 533

Aug 26 2009, 08:24 PM

that was good :) better than what i can do XD

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Vybz
Posts: 1466

Aug 26 2009, 08:28 PM

keep it up, the poem you posted has a lot of meaning in its simplicity and randomness ^^ grow on that and work with it. a lot of my poetry is random as well, i just come up with some stuff and I'm like where this come from lol ^^

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x-Silent_Loudmouth-x
Posts: 21

Aug 27 2009, 01:00 AM

yay, i wasnt talking a load of nonsense XD! thanks guys x

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xXxChrisJWxXx
Posts: 1546

Aug 27 2009, 01:31 AM

great work hun! That's a brilliant first go =]

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x-Silent_Loudmouth-x
Posts: 21

Aug 27 2009, 03:31 AM

thank you = )

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