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Emo Forums » Emo Poetry (Reply)

XxxcuteemoxxX
Posts: 272
untitled Nov 21 2009, 11:20 AM
( these ar more lyrics than a poem..jst wana see wat u think.. they are a bit random 2.. lol) Im out of tune, im off beat No one is tapping there feet My guitar strings bust and im out of luck this rock n' roll is all i got my red accustic and 20 bucks so i sing a song of things gone lost a sedder version of ones before i see the audiance all sitting glum what a pack of zombies, just give me a gun what a bottomless pit, what an emotional dick you riped my heart out you broke my soul you left me there with no where to go so this song is dedicated to you i know you will love it cus your self centered too my guitar strings broken and my voice is crocky but as long as im still living i'll keep rock n' rolling

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Emo Pictures - xXeMoRaCeRXx
xXeMoRaCeRXx
Posts: 18358
Nov 22 2009, 09:30 AM
I like it, but as I'm fussy (and I'm sure you know) there are a few spelling mistakes.
XxxcuteemoxxX
Posts: 272
Nov 22 2009, 10:50 PM
sry im jst really shit at spelling.. it terrible...
Emo Pictures - xXeMoRaCeRXx
xXeMoRaCeRXx
Posts: 18358
Nov 23 2009, 11:35 AM
I still understood the poem fine so all is good.

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