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Emo Forums » Emo Poetry (Reply)

XxxcuteemoxxX
Posts: 272
fingers bleed Dec 04 2009, 10:08 AM
my fingers bleed as my nails bend back from scraping on the wall but i dont feel the pain , there numb anyway i crawl up the wall but i fall, to the dark clod hard floor i roll up into a ball i see the light pier in and know it will never be mine for these pills hav sucked out my life , right down my spine the dark will consume me and the light will fade leaving me alone in the hole i know is me no one will help me cant you see

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skate-angel
Posts: 10
Dec 04 2009, 10:36 PM
I like it = ) It feels sad and hopeless.. =(
XxxcuteemoxxX
Posts: 272
Dec 04 2009, 10:49 PM
yh its is sad and hopeless
skate-angel
Posts: 10
Dec 05 2009, 12:10 AM
Ja, is why it's a good poem, you got the emotion in it = ) But I'm sorry you need to write poems like that =(
XxxcuteemoxxX
Posts: 272
Dec 09 2009, 07:05 AM
i dont need to.. i jst like to.. poems are better when they are sad.. nd it cld also be im not to good at writing happy ones hehe :)

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