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XXsorrowfulsuicideXX
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b!tch and safety May 06 2010, 02:11 PM

just wrote this is what came out enjoy! i would love helpful feed back go die you say well i say fuck you you judge me because of my friends my clothes my tounge well bitch if i die then youd better to if gods takeing away the evil ill be right behind you because you started the fight and now ill finish it embarassed? dont lie we all know who won no need to hide its not your fault you killed your happiness with stupidity but dont think that because i loved you once the i will again i would rather die a thousand deaths than ever be with you again because all you do is hurt me betay me and hit me well now i hit back the sting of embrassasment is good enough for me help i cant escape i know you hear me you ignore the painful cries ripped from my throat save me you say you love me but you sit by as i die help me i cant survive on my own i know you cant either save me from the lies the tears my shattered heart my enemys save me from me.

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DiEiNgInSiDe
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May 06 2010, 04:35 PM

there both really good but my favourite is the second one! very nice poems!!

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XXsorrowfulsuicideXX
Posts: 365

May 07 2010, 02:44 PM

thanks!

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