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I know the pieces fit, 'cause I saw them fall away. Schism, by Tool

Emo Forums » Emo Poetry (Reply)

Jeff_MCRnutter
Posts: 332
Against the current Jun 09 2010, 11:28 PM
Life's current is pulling me down, Trapping me in a web. Thoughts hurt like a bat to my crown, My will begins to ebb. I want to give in, Let the tide take me To hell because of my sin. An ocean of fire is all I can see. My soul will join the rest, Unseen from the herd, A feeling I detest. For my voice not to be heard. I must be something more, Let me ride the wave above them all. So my thoughts can be heard at shore, And written down for others to recall.

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xxDaRkTeMpTaTiOnxx
Posts: 2
Jun 10 2010, 05:41 AM
Wow..very deep and quite sad, emotional poem, great job i luvv it <3
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xXEmo_CupcakeXx
Posts: 51
Jun 10 2010, 10:44 AM
Thats Amazing
Breezy
Posts: 336
Jun 10 2010, 01:08 PM
aw babe thats an awesome poem. you got a talent there.
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XXsorrowfulsuicideXX
Posts: 365
Jun 14 2010, 11:33 AM
good job! you have got talent keep writing!

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