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Breezy
Posts: 336
Temptation Jun 14 2010, 12:26 PM
All i wanted was lingered of me, Fighting and holding back me, Licking the blood that drips from the lips, Convulsing with painful sips, Feel each vein under their skin, Hide for fear of calling it a sin, Can't control it but go away, Go in torture for the whole day, Till the sun sets and you lurk in shadows, Look up at the eerie gallows, Sharp white beings within her mouth, When they got suspicious she fled south, Urges so powerful she sits and cries, She has to give her friends stupid lies, The monster she has become has taken over, Sitting in the field with a four leaf clover, Try to find whats left of her, Maybe you can find a cure, Her soul is gone, she is lost, Her heart is what you tossed, Now she has nothing to hold onto, She is raging, can't be near you, Blood lathering in her hands, Looking over darkened lands, Nothing but greif she will find, As she loses her blackened mind...

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Emo Pictures - XXsorrowfulsuicideXX
XXsorrowfulsuicideXX
Posts: 365
Jun 15 2010, 10:22 AM
this is really good and deep i like it! how did you become a rhyming poet breezy?
Breezy
Posts: 336
Jun 15 2010, 01:26 PM
i have no idea what so ever, i just write and it flows. yea this is my favorite out of all the poems i've made, this one really touches me and brings tears to my eyes because of the passion of the true meaning of it.
Emo Pictures - XXsorrowfulsuicideXX
XXsorrowfulsuicideXX
Posts: 365
Jun 17 2010, 10:14 AM
it is really deep and your emotion shows through clearly. i like it and agree that this is one of the best you have wrote. i really hope that you can write moe that so this much emotion i really enjoy reading them.

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