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broken_wings21
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only gets worse Jul 11 2010, 09:27 PM

knock me down see my fate, close my eyes i am near that edge, so close i can feel the blood rushing in my veins, where, where i am i have no clue, so far from the faces around me, like shadows lingering in the night, i am scared and fear is everything he want, stand so ever still wait for that moment, when you can see past those eyes of hate, while he walks so ever elegantly, with a touch so incredibly strong, and he pulls you towards the gates of hell, with his eyes of shimmering fire, you can feel every torched soul. one hit and you were down, he knocked you down and watched, you took the fall so ever hard, and ended up so close to the edge, feelings of pure hate, you could never get away, get away from his powerful presence.. run run run but what good is that, when your running to the same place, trapped in your own soul, hes taking control of you, yet you have nothing you can do, and he whispers in your ears, his voice is seductive, he says don't worry love it only gets worse....only

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XXsorrowfulsuicideXX
Posts: 365

Jul 12 2010, 12:37 PM

wow ur amazin how long have you been writing?

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broken_wings21
Posts: 13

Jul 12 2010, 05:51 PM

um well i started in the 5th grade when things got really hard for me to deal with writing was my escape basically and i will be a freshman this year so 4 or 5 years i have been writing ^_^

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