Emo Scene Community

i was working on this book but i grew bored with it, i want to know what everyone thinks so i can be sure if i should continue it or not. Cold Creek Blood Brennan hopped onto the bus, it was the first day of school and his first year in this town of Cold creek, he didn’t know a single person here and was really nervous. The only friend he had made in this town in the month he was here was a boy named Emmet who had become his best friend, Emmet was cool and liked everything he liked plus Emmet never asked questions when something involving Brennan’s secret came up. Brennan had a dark secret that no one knew about but his parents, he made sure to stay away from making friends because of it but something was different about Emmet. Brennan snapped out of his thoughts as Emmet got on the bus and joined Brennan’s side “Hey dude!” Emmet said playfully nudging Brennan’s arm “Hey Emmet, first day of school…this oughta be good.” Brennan sighed “Oh cheer up, this is my second year at this school, I can show you around and get you used to stuff.” Emmet said, Emmet was thirteen and in the seventh grade as well as Brennan. “Yeah I guess so…alright, yeah cuz don’t we have the same classes except exploratory?” Brennan asked “yep, I got music and you have art.” Emmet said looking at Brennan with a smile “they’re right beside each other so just follow me and you’ll find art this afternoon.” He added seeing the uneasy look that grew on Brennan’s face. Their talking faded when a girl got on the bus, she had penetrating amber eyes, long black hair, a black short sleeved shirt and a pair of skinny jeans on “yeah that’s just Ebony, she never talks to anyone and shes real weird, I’d avoid her if I were you.” Emmet said as Emmet slightly glanced at her with cautious blue eyes. A weird smell came off that girl, it was much different than human smell, it smelled sort of like his kind “That can’t be right…” he said under his breathe “what’s that?” Emmet asked “nothing, talking to myself.” Brennan answered, startled. Brennan was a slim fair muscled boy with shaggy black hair and honey brown eyes while Emmet was a tall, slim but stocky boy with short brown hair and sky blue eyes, the two were definitely a sight when together. The bus finally reached school and all the kids cleared the long yellow vehicle, Emmet and Brennan went to their newly assigned lockers and got out what stuff they needed for that period. First class was English, one of Brennan’s favorite subjects, he was skilled at the literary arts and greatly did his work with an eager glimmer. When first period was done everyone went to their second period and after second period was lunch time “Boy am I starving!” Emmet said happily “yeah, me too.” Brennan said uneasily, he went to a table and brought out a small drink thermos “hey that’s it? Just a drink? What is it anyway?” Emmet asked “It’s a…uh…a special vitamin juice I have to drink cause I get sick real easily.” He lied, Emmet looked at him questioningly “Ok, well aren’t you hungry?” he asked “no I had a big breakfast.” Brennan answered quickly. Emmet shrugged the conversation off and the two chatted and carried on then two kids came in “who are they?” Brennan asked “oh them? There just the Mackentire sisters, Sora and Rosaline.” Emmet said and Brennan eyed the two girls, Sora the oldest, had golden brown hair and vibrant green eyes and Rosaline had darker redish brown hair with warm violet brown colored eyes. Brennan was startled when Lynna, Emmet’s girlfriend, jumped in the seat beside him “hey Em!” she squealed and hugged him, she sat back down and looked at Brennan “hey Brennan.” She said more calmly, Lynna was a skinny girl with bleach blonde hair and grey blue eyes.