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And_so_we_begin
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Puppet Show Feb 17 2011, 05:43 PM

A fortunate yet favorable and formitable foe At a painful and psychotic pittiful puppet show He'd mention a mere melotic phrase and his minions mimiced Every step and song he sang so strangly and systematic Like raving robots they did ravage and wreak havoc At the whim and will of my dear friend the fallen fanatic He'd pull the strings and then the things would follow his every command They'd walk and talk and lie and cheat just by his mere hand He had no friends just fake dolls and strings no wonder he did these things alone in a world of nothingness a world of fake smiles and thoughts merely puppets he had thrown together and away he did toss so he sat on his thrown and said to himself "Is this what i want?" "people to follow every command, yet when i need them i am lost."

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xXeMoRaCeRXx
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Feb 18 2011, 02:16 PM

Intelligent poem. I liked it.

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Glass_Tears
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Feb 23 2011, 12:16 PM

i really like it :)

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