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TheDayILeftTheWomb
Posts: 27
A traumatic fairytale of over-dramatics and lies Feb 26 2011, 12:06 AM
Hey, i dont know if this is a poem, its just some sort of writing. It was written over a year and a half ago when i wasn't in the best of places. Tell me what you think. -------------------------------------------------------- I. Yes, I. Myself, me, i. perhaps thats who i should of thought of all along. Its evident no one else was going to. Afterall who would? Not you thats for sure. But im not after your sympathy, im not trying to fill your mind with guilt. No, im past that. I moved on. Well "my love", i trusted you. I gave you my all, my everything. when i said i loved you, i didnt say it just for the sake of it; i meant it. Love isnt a word i use sparingly, now i wish i could say i did with you. But i didnt. You. Did you ever feel like i did about you? or were you using me? Using me to get over him. A small peice of me knew you still felt for him, loved him. I suppose i should have realised, and let go when i had the chance. But no, i held on, hoping, hoping, your feelings would change. Hoping, hoping, that you'd feel the same. You never did love me did you? No, ofcourse not. How could you? Well now i know how it feels to hate me, resent me, to feel sick everytime you see me. But its okay for you, you're gone. I have to live with myself for everyday that im alive. (shouldnt be too long then.) Him. He has it all, doesnt he? He was able to give you everything i couldnt. why, why drag me into this mess? Oh wait, it was all part of your plan. You were making him jealous wernt you? Or were you lying to yourself, trying to move on? You wernt ready, but you didnt realise. What a grand decision that was. Me and you were so close, yet so distant. Dont worry "my love", i will have the last laugh. Because this is war. "War?" you may say. yes, war. because this isnt over until one, or both of us are dead. Next time, i'll do better. Next time i'll find someone who REALLY loves me. Next time i'll find someone special. Next time, next time. I'll find someone who'll be there for me, and care, and make everything okay. I'll find someone who'll brighten my everyday. I'll find someone i trust. Some one i love. You never really did love me did you? No. It was all just a traumatic fairytale of over-dramatics and lies. oh and one last thing "my love", the clocks ticking, you best grow a heart before time runs out.

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Emo Pictures - xXeMoRaCeRXx
xXeMoRaCeRXx
Posts: 18335
Feb 26 2011, 08:56 AM
Very well written. I enjoyed reading it.
Emo Pictures - PunkEmoFreak
PunkEmoFreak
Posts: 1
Feb 26 2011, 10:15 AM
love it! so much like what happened to me very well written my friend :)
TheDayILeftTheWomb
Posts: 27
Feb 26 2011, 10:45 AM
Thankyou! :) It means alot when people like the things i write. Im thinking of turning it into a set of lyrics
Emo Pictures - xXeMoRaCeRXx
xXeMoRaCeRXx
Posts: 18335
Feb 27 2011, 06:41 AM
Great idea!

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