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IloveGummieBears
Posts: 84
The Darkness Jul 04 2011, 09:42 PM
My walls are closing in As i start to regret my sins Makes me think about every sound I hear Have you seen the darkness move There's something there Its ready for the scare It brings the picture i thought i burned Brings back the mistakes I never learned It makes you cry the tears of the ones you have forgot Changes your soul as you remember the things you have not From Blue to Black

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MusicLoveerrr
Posts: 102
Jul 05 2011, 07:32 AM
awesome poem :)
IloveGummieBears
Posts: 84
Aug 04 2011, 11:42 PM
Thank you
Paramorefreak789
Posts: 1
Aug 07 2011, 07:55 PM
thats amazin and im trying my hardest not to mess up on this comment <3 amazing work :3
RavenEd1
Posts: 130
Aug 28 2011, 11:38 AM
Wonderful work. I like how you equate feeling the walls close in as you realize your sins, very strong mental image.
IloveGummieBears
Posts: 84
Aug 28 2011, 12:22 PM
Thank you ^_^

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