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Amanda_Annihilation
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Forever... Aug 20 2011, 01:58 PM
Forever By: Amanda Augustus For: Thomas Snider <3 I love you. Looking up at the sky, Praying that this shall never die, I want to tell you how much I care, But one look in your eyes and I can only stare. I fear that this may be a mistake, Giving you this heart to break, I hope you treasure me to the end, As you accept this broken life to mend. I need you more than I need to inhale, Wanting you more as I exhale, I need a way to tell you that I love you, Because this love I know is true. I want to sing you the perfect song, But when I try I get all the notes wrong, I wish this poem would be actually worth your time, But when I try and write I can’t seem to rhyme. I love you more than words can say, A love that shall never fray, I pray to God you’ll never leave, For if you do I don’t know how I’d breathe. I may not be perfect, and easy to hate, But break my heart and I’ll meet my fate, I understand if you don’t want me, If you only intend to hurt me then just leave me be. But I’ll love you forever, A love that shall never sever, And for you love is all I feel, Yes, this love is truly real. For more of my poetry visit http://www.facebook.com/pages/Amanda-Augustuss-Poetry/214540568584260

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OnyxAngel
Posts: 833
Aug 20 2011, 03:11 PM
Wow, this is one of the best poems I've ever read :) Good job.
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xXeMoRaCeRXx
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Aug 23 2011, 01:35 PM
I enjoyed this :)
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Princess-OF-Pain
Posts: 432
Aug 23 2011, 01:41 PM
wow this was really great poem :)

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