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Emo Pictures - KaraLooksBetterDead
KaraLooksBetterDead
Posts: 2
Killed by your comody. Oct 05 2011, 09:07 PM
<i> Tormented with lies, Pain lingers beneath my eyes. This comody you call hatred, Leaves me in a state of depretion. So I let my dreams be broken. Since im lost theres no sence of hopeing. My thaughts are unspoken. Theres no rest for the hatred, the rasisum, the wicked. Im going to let the razor drown me. The reaper is learking. With my words echoing in the shadow. My lifes been taken.

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Emo Pictures - Vlad_lll_Dracula
Vlad_lll_Dracula
Posts: 10
Oct 15 2011, 10:14 PM
I hope you don't mind if I correct the grammar. <i> Tormented with lies, Pain lingers beneath my eyes. This comedy you call hatred, Leaves me in a state of depression. So I let my dreams be broken. Since I am lost there is no sence of hoping. My thoughts are unspoken. There is no rest for the hatred, the racism, the wicked. Im going to let the razor drown me. The reaper is larking. With my words echoing in the shadow. My life has been taken. I do think it is a good poem, keep up with your poetry writing because you seem to have some talent.

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