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8DSilentTearD8
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A Place to Call my own Jan 07 2012, 08:17 PM

No one understands That deep down I am in pain I hide it everyday Life is just a pain Its hard to continue But i manage some how Nowhere to be myself But here I am safe Hiding from the case Of being misplaced All I have left Is what hurts me Having to see your face So distracted with your pain It pushes me down to a place Where I can call my own Wishing, wanting, fighting Wanting to rise Fighting to stay above the surface Wishing for your happiness Is where I can call my own My own place in hell Burning with anger Cooling with sadness Rising with happiness

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tOM
Posts: 36

Jan 07 2012, 09:50 PM

I like it, not that you had to write it, but that you wrote it... If that makes any sense.... Very deep (your probably like "no sh*t") I think that lots of people can relate to it though, having a Special place to do what you want and no one can/will stop you... :/ Keep writing

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xXeMoRaCeRXx
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Jan 08 2012, 11:21 AM

I can relate to this. It's a great poem!

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8DSilentTearD8
Posts: 36

Jan 11 2012, 04:05 PM

Thanks guys, it means a lot :) And me and my friend rephrased Teenagers-by: Black Veil Brides- And made it so that it was about teachers xD it was so funny cause she gave to her teachers XD

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EmoRazorBlade
Posts: 68

Jan 14 2012, 09:07 AM

Its really good... Everyone here should/can relate to it, just a place to call your own where u can do basically what you want without the interferance of others :/ Wow, really deep :]

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