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Emo Pictures - jaz1127
jaz1127
Posts: 42
Why am i here Jan 17 2012, 05:03 AM
why was I born, everyone thinks im a thorn in their backside, there just for a ride I see them stare, as if they will ever care why am I alive I wish I could be killed with deaths scythe please end my pain, people use me for their personal gain im an emo, with no ego others they say they wanna help, but really they wanna see me yelp if I die, no one would cry they'd dance and rejoice, saying it was my choice to end my life, with deaths scythe if I was dead, no tear would be shed save me from my secret shame, or ill end my eternal pain!

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Emo Pictures - LostStaRr
LostStaRr
Posts: 4
Jan 17 2012, 06:41 AM
Your really good at writing I liked it
WingedVenomXD
Posts: 123
Jan 17 2012, 06:23 PM
I love your poems your really good at expressing your emotions and using energy. I sound like my teacher. But I loved it
Emo Pictures - jaz1127
jaz1127
Posts: 42
Jan 18 2012, 04:46 AM
thnx guys rarly ever get ppl liking my poems they always say its too grim :p
Emo Pictures - xXeMoRaCeRXx
xXeMoRaCeRXx
Posts: 18314
Jan 18 2012, 03:26 PM
grim can be very good though if done well :)
Emo Pictures - jaz1127
jaz1127
Posts: 42
Jan 10 2013, 06:39 AM
ive put up 3 more that i forgot about in my documents let me know what u think

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