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xxxEvexxx
Posts: 75

the end Feb 14 2012, 08:33 AM

he sits there still as stone his big, brown eyes and thier amber glow is that a trickle of red? maybe he's already dead? no, I can see him breathing but each breath is hard his time has come to say goodbye his time has come to die there is nothing that can now be done to save this equistite creature no! hes stopped breathing altogether I hold him in my arms I'm not ready to let him go to face the world alone but it is too late he's already gone but he'll never be gone in my heart

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jaz1127
Posts: 41

Feb 17 2012, 05:30 AM

im actually left speachless dunno what to say to this poem its extremely deep bravo bravo x

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xXeMoRaCeRXx
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Feb 19 2012, 11:57 AM

I agree!

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xxxEvexxx
Posts: 75

Feb 22 2012, 08:14 AM

thanks it means a lot

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