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tikleme
Posts: 63

To - Love Poem Feb 25 2012, 04:42 AM

smth i wrote to my guy <3 How do I begin, To express me love? You are my happiness within, In which I am unworthy of. Without you would be like losing my skin, Naked and exposed. To lie to you would be a sin; I no longer feel disclosed. Sweet death no longer pleases me, For even heaven without you would be hell. Around you, I feel free; I have lost my shell. You are no task, You make me live. I can finally unmask, I now feel alive. I give you my heart, Will you accept and not break? I would be torn apart, If this was fake.

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josephzk
Posts: 12

Feb 25 2012, 12:30 PM

Its goood:) But why one sec does the emotion change each paragraph? P: 1 = I love you so much, P2 = I hate you, P3 = Im better of without you. etc. :3

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Vybz
Posts: 1466

Feb 25 2012, 05:58 PM

What a lucky guy! A very well written poem!! I love it! Keep it up.

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tikleme
Posts: 63

Feb 25 2012, 06:02 PM

erm no.... its like a dark love thing. kinda goes deeper than the actual words XD like: i love you, you let me be myself and i couldn't live without you, you give me meaning, i am now myself, and be mine. XP and thx vybz

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