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SilverDust144
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The Mist Apr 07 2012, 08:32 PM

I just wrote this out of boredom. Feel free to comment. The Mist It’s cloudy haze surrounds me Gray is all I see Voices taunt me in the distance But the haze keeps me away No matter how hard I run No matter how hard I look I can’t see an end It sticks to my skin Sweet and dew run down my neck Dizziness hits And blackness clouds The Mist It curls around me It taunts me It takes the breath away Slowly Conciseness slips away And the Mist is left behind Laughing…

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xXeMoRaCeRXx
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Apr 08 2012, 03:28 PM

Love this :)

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SilverDust144
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Apr 08 2012, 05:17 PM

Thank you :)

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MakeAbiRawr
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Apr 08 2012, 08:46 PM

That's amazing :D

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SilverDust144
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Apr 09 2012, 04:02 PM

Thank you :) Glad you like it :)

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