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Vermoord
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Lost on sea. Aug 16 2013, 11:56 PM

Your love is like a landmine just waiting for its next victim to destroy. Like the cold winter's in the middle of the forgotten part of illinois. You woke me up while i was dreaming the american dream. You drag me out of bed and silence my voice before i can even scream. I got wrecked up on your coast,left to die on the destroyed remains of my little ship. I tried to sail on the changing tides of your feelings but i made a little slip. I dropped from my boat into the deep blue emotionless sea. Only to realise the coast is the only thing looking out for me.

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flarencekun
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Aug 17 2013, 12:13 AM

u r fond of melancholic type of poem., i can see through you now.,. i think u're carrying a heavy burden that u know others will not be able to help u., only urself., if that's the reason., i respect ur courage and strength.,. anyways., u strike yet another emotion in your poem.,. readers will really feel ur contemplation to something yet they're unsure what "something" is it., and they will realize that they are thinking about their own misery and will claim to solve it.,. u realli got it going there buddy.,. :]

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