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Emo Pictures - DarkTranquility
DarkTranquility
Posts: 37
The Dethroned Prince Aug 26 2013, 10:53 PM
The one I called My Dark Prince Is my prince no longer Its all past tense He has been dethroned By me He shall no longer rule By me No longer will he question my love No longer shall he question my ways No longer will he question my intentions No longer shall he question my plays I've cut him out of my life But alas, a scar shall remain A scar that won't heal All my feelings in my scar shall remain We would have been kings We would have ruled But no longer A love no longer fueled I literally just wrote this while listening to Loveotomy by Blood On The Dance Floor. I was like I will write a poem and chose a random song and started typing. For me, this is a really short poem. xD Comments/Critiques? First drafts never seem right to me. xD

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soulessangel666
Posts: 37
Aug 29 2013, 06:26 PM
OMG THIS IS SO GOOD!!!!! it ryms [sorry dont now how to spell tht word:[ ] it flows its freaking amazing dude!!
Emo Pictures - DarkTranquility
DarkTranquility
Posts: 37
Aug 30 2013, 11:59 AM
Thanks .o. I wrote it right on the spot and I was iffy about it. All of my poems rhyme. I have two others posted too if you wanna check em out.
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xXeMoRaCeRXx
Posts: 18335
Aug 31 2013, 05:55 AM
Really enjoyed this. Thanks for sharing :)

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