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MellowCloudsRevenge
Posts: 94
The Dying Rose Dec 19 2013, 09:48 AM
There once was a girl whom lived in her own world, Who never failed to see, The world upon her judges critically, As she looks around, her views of society changes within time, But with hope and strength, her heart rings like a chime, Sometimes, she feels less than a dime, But things that help me with life are writing rhymes, But as the world collapses due to self-pity and disgust, She always has hopes and her dreams never turn to dust, But she got older, her hopes and dreams begin to die, As her bullies tormented her and she could only look at a dark sky, She never lost hope, she held her head high, But as she cooked food, she just liked french fries, She grew up thus far to be a strong, independent girl, Who inspires to be themselves and to also tune out the world

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Emo Pictures - Vybz
Vybz
Posts: 1466
Dec 20 2013, 04:50 AM
This is an empowering and well written poem!
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-_-x
Posts: 543
Dec 20 2013, 05:00 PM
This poem is very lovely. :) One of the best poems I've read so far. I love how you kept your rhymes all the way through as it still made sense.
MellowCloudsRevenge
Posts: 94
Dec 23 2013, 11:18 AM
Awww thanks :) ^_^

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