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Live-to-Die
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Those who choose... Dec 29 2013, 05:41 PM

When you feel your going nowhere, You know your going just as slow, The weakness of your bones may stop you, The beat of your heart may carry you, The drive is within the passion, The passion of knowing for whom you fight, There is no happiness in a world of uncertainty, There is no harm in knowing, Something's are better off unsaid, Something's you just need to know, If you don't know whom your fighting for, Then fight to find out, Some people block out the terror, Somepeople no longer have feelings, Some people choose to ignore, And others choose to forget, But who is right? Well let me tell you, Neither, No one can learn from mistakes unless they remember, Lest we forget we shall remember, Otherwise we shall repeat, Always remember there is someone whom your fighting for.

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Kate
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Dec 30 2013, 04:07 AM

love =)

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xXeMoRaCeRXx
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Dec 30 2013, 04:11 PM

..it :)

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Bones
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Jan 03 2014, 02:26 AM

..loads x

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SimplyNemo
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Jan 04 2014, 01:28 AM

very interesting... impreove grammar, but still very nice :3

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Live-to-Die
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Jan 07 2014, 01:51 PM

Thank you! :)

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Live-to-Die
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Jan 15 2014, 09:16 AM

Whereabouts do I need to improve my grammar? Much appreciated!

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