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suicide note Sep 18 2014, 10:47 PM
in the hospital room three four(34) the nurse comes and open the door but she finds no breath or pulse she runs off to call someone else they try to bring me back to life but I'm hanging on too tight they think blowing air is the life kiss when all I need is you to touch my lips let me tell you my story or let's just say death why I chose to leave the world and my family to miss 'cause I couldn't see you move on and forget all about me thought you were the one who would change my destiny so it killed me before I killed my self after I gave everything I could give because of you I preferred dying doctors knew and stopped trying and when you read this remember crying

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Emo Pictures - xXeMoRaCeRXx
xXeMoRaCeRXx
Posts: 18346
Sep 19 2014, 12:05 PM
I like your poems thanks for sharing.
Deleted User
Sep 20 2014, 01:26 AM
Thank for being the only one in the world that likes them
Emo Pictures - Creepypirates
Creepypirates
Posts: 11
Sep 20 2014, 05:57 AM
You are extremely talented. It hurt to read your poem. In every line, I felt a sharp pain. The feeling you were trying to convey came through in my opinion. Please keep writing poems because you're really amazing!

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