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Emo Forums » Emo Poetry (Reply)

calvingoesrawwr
Posts: 5
"society's ugly" May 25 2015, 02:43 PM
heyy firstt attempt at thiss, soo let me know what you think guisee :3 Society is ugly: “Societies ugly” I tell you as you stand crying in a mirror, “beauty doesn’t always live in a stick thin figure”. But you turn away and collapse, crying on the floor as you stare at the pictures of models on the door. “The perfect persons an illusion, it doesn’t exist and your just painting insecurity with scars on your wrists”. Yet you still starve yourself with hopes of size zero, so you can fill a dress with an oversized ego. You hug the toilet bowl after every meal you eat, but with every time you purge that’s another damn defeat. I wish you could see and look through my eyes at the perfect person thats living inside. And I know youre filled with sadness and hatreds on a rise but happiness don’t live in a gap between your thighs. “You have a hunger for beauty and eat the medias lies and if you carry on like this itll be your demise”. You say you lay awake at night staring at the ceiling just, wishing and hoping praying for some meaning. but you wont find that in a number on a scale as your hair falls out and body becomes frail

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Merari_Phoenix
Posts: 5
May 25 2015, 06:06 PM
I agree
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HeartsAndRazors
Posts: 25
May 27 2015, 03:37 PM
This is really good.
Deleted User
Jun 01 2015, 05:35 AM
Amazing
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Destroythebeautiful
Posts: 7
Aug 27 2015, 04:46 PM
This almost made me cry, amazing.
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Walking_on_the_edge1
Posts: 5
Dec 03 2015, 06:50 PM
This is very good, ever thought of putting up your poetry on wattpad?
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painlover
Posts: 1
Jan 18 2016, 05:17 PM
you are so right! it couldnt be described anybetter !!!!!! really beautiful writing (:
xJetSetx
Posts: 76
Jan 18 2016, 10:52 PM
This is awesome! cx
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fallentoashes
Posts: 120
Mar 25 2016, 01:17 AM
I really love this!
calvingoesrawwr
Posts: 5
Nov 08 2016, 05:02 PM
thankyou guys i really appreciate all the nice comments :3
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seth_scolex
Posts: 48
Nov 08 2016, 07:23 PM
wow this was like a year ago! any new material? "Yet you still starve yourself with hopes of size zero, so you can fill a dress with an oversized ego." <-- brutal <3
calvingoesrawwr
Posts: 5
Dec 05 2016, 11:22 PM
urmm guys i know i know its really late but guys i posted a new poem please check it out and give me your thoughts, https://www.soemo.co.uk/forums/topic.php?id=2813341 alsooo i you could or would like to see more could you please follow me on my tumblr @calvingoesrawwr (with two w's) or instagram @calvingoesrawr (with one w xD) anyways thankyou guys
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PurpleFire
Posts: 289
Dec 06 2016, 02:05 PM
Awesome! Totally agreed!

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