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Polski_101
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The Fallen Angel Jun 24 2015, 10:13 AM

Just a note: This was a task from my English Literature Class A2 which we had to write a sonnet in the style of Shakespeare. I hope you all like it and please leave some feedback for what you think The Fallen Angel You look at me with just one eye One faded smile, truthful but weak Something to hide, some type of lie Your outlook to life seeming bleak I feel your heart, that crown of thorns It holds no fear, just seems so shy You see those who they call 'normal' But it's us, I must wonder why Why do people think we are strange? For you are so sweet, but you hide In a dark veil, covering your beauty As I write this too, yo're my mind With all of this I show you love A fallen angel from that sky above Another note: Yo're is supposed to represent you're but in shakespeares sonnets words were shortened to fit the pattern like I have here

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MasterMoonSocks
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Jun 24 2015, 02:51 PM

This is cool, wd.

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BlackVeilBridesRebel
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Jun 25 2015, 07:52 PM

I just freaking love the title! *Sorry! Reference to my favorite band!*

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Polski_101
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Jul 01 2015, 11:04 AM

Thank you both, sadly the reception at Sixth Form wasn't as Popular but that's probably because only two of us like the band I've referenced. My teacher really liked it though, maybe it gets be on track for an A this year!

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