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(I write a bunch of lyrics and have about 30-something full songs written and I like to show them to people so tell me what you think :) WARNING: Very dark with topic of suicide) I hit rock bottom and it shattered my teeth As I was bleeding from my mouth I opened it to scream But no words came out and I kept crying for help But there was no sound so I kicked and flailed because my life is always coming right off the rails This world's grown tired of me, and I've grown tired of it So I'll jump straight to the grand finale I took a fucking 12 step plan to try and help with all these problems but they don't understand There's nothing that can solve them I still hate my self Can barely get out of bed They said they'd be there for me I was alone in the end I'm still alone I'm still so alone I've said it before and I'll say it again I may be alive but I feel so dead Because it's not about having someone in the room with me It's about knowing there's someone that can truly understand me But I'm still alone I'm still so alone Everything I've said has never seemed to come out right And every day since I was 16's been a constant fight because I'm always so consumed by doom I know this to be true but there's a burden on my psyche that has always seemed to loom I'm always struggling to keep my thoughts in check I tried my best and followed a 12 step fucking plan But never reached out And never had a friend Because I'm constantly afraid I'll fuck it up again But I'll fix all that, when I'm swinging 'round & 'round I'm swinging 'round and 'round My feet won't touch the ground gravity does its work This life's the fucking worst I'm swinging 'round and 'round These feet don't touch the ground Gravity does its worst Suspended by the rope And as my death creeps The last thing I'll ever hear ... Is this fucking rope creak. Around & Around we go! Spinning,spinning,hanging,choking Around & Around we go! Crying,screaming,flailing,loathing Around & Around we go.. go.. go Never knowing hope, hope, no hope ... Around & Around we go... (Hope you guys could get a feel on the form and everything of the song :) I take a lot of my musical/lyrical inspiration from Yuth Forever. Be sure to let me know what you think!)