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BlackRose
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Poem I wrote... Jun 20 2008, 10:14 AM
Running Out Of Time Farther from the start, A blindness in the eyes, Shattering of the heart, Increases her many cries, Searching of the soul, Cutting of the wrists, Life feeling so cold, Along it's many twists, Knocking at death's door, Wanting to go inside, Beaten, belittled and sore, She looks for someone to confide, A shaken young girl, With a disturbed young mind, In a crumbling world, She's running out of time.

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Emo Pictures - xXeMoRaCeRXx
xXeMoRaCeRXx
Posts: 18362
Jun 20 2008, 11:55 AM
I especially like the last verse.
Emo Pictures - fuckingXtrash
fuckingXtrash
Posts: 4
Jun 26 2008, 01:49 PM
I agree! The last verse was beautiful!^^
Emo Pictures - poetryxisxmyxsheild
poetryxisxmyxsheild
Posts: 187
Jul 02 2008, 10:05 AM
i love the whole thing i can relate so much to this
Emo Pictures - xSUICIDEBLOODx
xSUICIDEBLOODx
Posts: 7255
Jul 08 2008, 10:50 AM
you are really talented <3 beautiful^^
Monster
Posts: 55
Jun 18 2010, 08:38 AM
i agree this is really good . .
Emo Pictures - XXsorrowfulsuicideXX
XXsorrowfulsuicideXX
Posts: 365
Jun 21 2010, 07:24 PM
its really good and i can relate to the last verse really well. good job.

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