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xXeMoRaCeRXx
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no control Aug 30 2008, 07:48 AM

This one is kinda bleh.....but it made sense to me during the time i wrote it, so yeh.... Confused, scared, outraged.... These are the feelings that scream HELP! As he lies there curled up in the corner, crying, no wait.....laughing. Yes, laughing at the thoughts he can no longer control. Laughing at the sick, twisted, deranged mental pictures. He has given up on fighting them. Given up on trying to be normal. So, now, instead of crying and living in pain..... He laughs.

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shepardosdemon
Posts: 2741

Aug 30 2008, 10:20 AM

I like this poem, It makes me think of myself sometimes, when no one is around and im sad ill start laughing sometimes. :S

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JustMe
Posts: 177

Aug 30 2008, 02:18 PM

I Like It =] Reminds Me Of My Mate..

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victhevamp
Posts: 2303

Aug 31 2008, 03:29 PM

oooo creepy

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