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my first ever serious poem Nov 01 2008, 10:02 AM

well i dont write sad poems so this is my first ever poem give feedback please thankkies :) . . . The flowers are bronze and chesnut, and the stem contains silver and gold, on top of the soil dances 7 magpies, with secrets never to be told. Under the willow lay's a farie, silent but warm to touch, as the willow turns grey and the branches turn old, the farie awakens as such. She dances the dance of the magpies, and as her roots begin to grow and her petals begin to show, soon enough she is anouther bronze and chesnut flower to grow. . . . thankkies for reading :]

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