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Things not what they used to be Missing one inside of me Deathly lost, this can't be real Cannot stand this hell I feel Fade To Black, by Metallica

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Emo Pictures - just_another_emo_kid
just_another_emo_kid
Posts: 280
Im Not Stabbing You, Im Just Pushing You With My Knife Dec 09 2008, 07:54 AM
You wont let go. Each word is a crushing blow. Your eyes kill my inner being. Lets start the show. You wont let go of me. Each word you spit is a killing strike. Your presents murders me. I cant see, lies replace blood. Each hole is another reminder. I cant stand, im drowning in a pool of tears. Each blow begins to hinder. Raise the curtain on the murder scene. The audience doesnt think its obscene. All the things youve done, theyve seen. Its too late now, you fucked up. Your life is over, your time is up. Close the curtain as the audience applauses. this would be a more screamo/technical song...

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selfhater
Posts: 678
Dec 09 2008, 08:12 AM
i like it!. could do with some spell checking. but that isnt really important. nice one!
Emo Pictures - just_another_emo_kid
just_another_emo_kid
Posts: 280
Dec 10 2008, 07:37 AM
yah... i know... im not a good speller man... thnx for the comment.
selfhater
Posts: 678
Dec 10 2008, 01:03 PM
yer the spelling isnt the important thing imo, i like the words XD
Emo Pictures - just_another_emo_kid
just_another_emo_kid
Posts: 280
Dec 11 2008, 07:08 AM
im hoping to actually put this out into a real song... my problem is, we lack a few items to do it. i need a mic amp, one of my guitarists need a chord, we need a drummer especially. other thatn that, were ready.
selfhater
Posts: 678
Dec 12 2008, 12:05 AM
when u say ur guitarist needs a chord, what u mean? he can't play or has no clothes, or needs a lead to go to the amp lool
Emo Pictures - just_another_emo_kid
just_another_emo_kid
Posts: 280
Dec 12 2008, 07:26 AM
what? no... i meant he needs a chord for his guitar to hook to the amp. lol needs clothes? wtf man? XD
selfhater
Posts: 678
Dec 12 2008, 07:52 AM
lol chords, clothes.. never heard that? lool ebay have sum cheap ones. but u should check ur local store and get some quality ones, might cos a bit more but they will last .
Emo Pictures - prince_j
prince_j
Posts: 95
Dec 15 2008, 01:20 AM
i liked.it ^^
Emo Pictures - just_another_emo_kid
just_another_emo_kid
Posts: 280
Dec 15 2008, 07:35 AM
thats the problem with stores in marion, everything dies in about a week or two. Music and Sound is one of many horrible places to get equipment in this screwed up town i live in. and thnx to prince_j

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