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xXxRossAsphyxiatedxX
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boredd&&pissed off(: Jan 09 2009, 11:03 PM

wellive realized everytime i get really mad i turn outwriting some poems.i mean i suck in rhyming nd shitt but they turn out ok without the rhyming lol, today i was mad at this bitch so i made her a poem :]

"bitch" by: me lol

"ignorant people don't know who they hurt til' karma gets them back.

karma is a bitch and so are you.

can't you realize you're a fake?

find yourself,its pathetic to be someone else.

i hate you, you love me, this storys getting old.

so pretty eyes, so many lies.

the truth will come out anyways.why even hide?

well thts all i got =/ i still need the endingg.

im bored so talk to me yeah :]

nd also help me wit the poem plz!

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Jan 10 2009, 11:48 PM

Wow yea that poem is reeli good,,i just thin u need one or two dramatic lines at the end something like ''how am i supposed to go through this life with silly fakes like you in the way. I have to auffer the pain of your being each and every day'' sorry im so bad at poetry but something like that

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rawrrsauce
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Jan 11 2009, 01:03 AM

or... the line....... "rawrrr" :)

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OuToFWhack007
Posts: 291

Feb 10 2009, 06:56 PM

Nice one (FromYesterday)
and RAWR is also appropriate(i think that is how you spell it, i suck at spelling)

so how do you feel know about the um...bitch?

haha here is something dumb rhyme for you

go away
um.....something something something something
cause i will find you some day

i hoped that helped

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