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CyanideCinderella
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A poem Aug 04 2009, 11:41 AM

My head is spinning And I can't see My hair is falling I don't look like me My feet are swollen From running away My mouth is broken Ive got nothing left to say My fingers are aching And I can't feel My legs are getting tired Is this coldness real? My joints are ridgid And wearing away Too much time has been wasted I forgot yesterday Words mean nothing When they are hollow And now theres no one In this world i would follow Because this world isnt big enough For you and me Which one will fall first Wait and see.

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xXxChrisJWxXx
Posts: 1545

Aug 04 2009, 01:20 PM

Hun you're works getting better in my opinion. It's easy to relate to which is always good. I love it, every work has it'd place and yours is getting closer to the top each time.

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Aug 05 2009, 02:23 PM

WTF IS THIS SHIT?

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Vybz
Posts: 1466

Aug 05 2009, 06:17 PM

^ its not shit it is a nice poem

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xXxChrisJWxXx
Posts: 1545

Aug 06 2009, 04:45 AM

If you can not understand emotional pieces of art (as poetry is an art form) then please do not comment. You are just like the critics of modern are and impressionism as they were first being introduced. Grow up please this is meant to be a peaceful community.

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xXxChrisJWxXx
Posts: 1545

Aug 06 2009, 05:25 AM

http://amateurpoetry.yolasite.com/a-poem.php

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