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The world is falling like a final curtain to my feet, And the wish for your applause is taking over me For The Taking, by From First To Last

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Oh god Aug 05 2009, 02:22 PM
Oh god. Why do you make me so sad? It makes me want to cuuuuuut cuuuuuut cutttttttttttttttttttt OMG y y u make me sad. CUT CUT THE WORLD BURN ALL THESE FUCKERS FUCK FUCK FUCKALOO

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Aug 05 2009, 02:32 PM
Indeed.
Emo Pictures - Vybz
Vybz
Posts: 1466
Aug 05 2009, 03:50 PM
this poem is short.. simple.. i must say .. The last time was a bit random.. killing the poem and the repetition was also pointless.. "cut cut" ... 1 you should have named the poem "cut cut" 2 from what i have gathered the poem is about being sad, cutting and burning?... Work on your writing structure, the poem just seems like pointless rambling
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xEvilEmox
Posts: 264
Aug 06 2009, 07:14 AM
Pointless Bullshit :P

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