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It was just my mistake thinking you cared. It was just my mistake thinking you'd be there. Hanging on to long, by Duffy

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XxxcuteemoxxX
Posts: 272
Disco Land Aug 21 2009, 01:58 PM
Take another hit, take a pill Watch the lights and feel the thrill Take a drag, blow the smoke Hold it in, let it out Take a line, hold the time Loose the pain, drink the cane Dance the floor till your sore Take some more you little whore Feel it take over, let it in Insert the needle, push the pin Come join the fun, feel numb Get blown away, do it again another day Feel high and fly Say goodbye!

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Emo Pictures - xXeMoRaCeRXx
xXeMoRaCeRXx
Posts: 18363
Aug 21 2009, 04:43 PM
Welcoming to have a poem on this topic.
Emo Pictures - Vybz
Vybz
Posts: 1466
Aug 21 2009, 08:00 PM
^ yea interesting i like it.. wild!
XxxcuteemoxxX
Posts: 272
Aug 22 2009, 02:33 AM
yh this topic is really good to write on cus u can express urself in so many ways..
Emo Pictures - xXxChrisJWxXx
xXxChrisJWxXx
Posts: 1545
Aug 24 2009, 02:35 PM
Great work hun, your poems are good and you should be proud of them, if you want I can publish a few at Amateur Poetry I just need your permission and a authors name you would like to use. I can't publish them all because they need to be age appropriate etc. so I couldn't publish for example "lets just touch" (sorry if I got the name of it wrong =S), just PM me your poems URLs and the relevant info I mentioned perviously and I can begin publishing within a week (I tend to do it the same day to get it out of the way for the next piece). Anyway great work hun!!! Hope to publish you soon.
XxxcuteemoxxX
Posts: 272
Sep 11 2009, 05:08 AM
yh shure u can publish any u want... and u can use my user name on here if u like with my first name in brackets which is Ruby.... nd yh i understand abt the age thing.. nd thanxs for considering my work for ur site... nd will try put somemore on as soon as possible.. but really busy right nw with skl... so might be a while before i put any new ones on sry... thanxs again.. :)
Deleted User
Sep 11 2009, 04:50 PM
Thats an awsome poem.. like with the right beat it could be a rap

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