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xXxChrisJWxXx
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Fleeting Love Aug 26 2009, 08:36 AM

I see nothing in your eyes As another piece of me dies You continue with your lies There are no more highs You take another breath It's just leading to my death My love for you compressed Just making me depressed The end of us despised There's finally fires in your eyes This comes as no surprise As soon as one of us dies I believe in you I wish I could show you There's nothing wrong with you There's just us two Say goodbye As we dance with the devil We're not on the level We're nothing that special I can't erase the stupid things I said Inside of me I just feel so dead You're the only thing in my head Why couldn't it be my end instead Our love is just so dead What's left is inside your head This is my end instead We should have just fled

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CyanideCinderella
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Aug 26 2009, 08:53 AM

whoa. This actually made me cry, its....its...fucking brillant(: xxxxxxx

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xXxChrisJWxXx
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Aug 26 2009, 09:06 AM

I'm sorry I didn't want to make people cry =[ lol Deepest one I wrote in a while xx

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CyanideCinderella
Posts: 282

Aug 26 2009, 09:18 AM

No it made me cry in a good way (: Its epic xx

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xXxChrisJWxXx
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Aug 26 2009, 09:20 AM

Aww thank you hun xxxx

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CyanideCinderella
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Aug 26 2009, 09:43 AM

No problem baby (:

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Vybz
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Aug 27 2009, 01:50 PM

wow.. great work, i must say it really is deep ...i can relate

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xXxChrisJWxXx
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Aug 28 2009, 08:26 AM

~They are getting good, somehow easy to write again

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Pagan
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Aug 29 2009, 12:47 PM

baby this is really deep!!! i like it!!

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