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Emo Pictures - xXxChrisJWxXx
xXxChrisJWxXx
Posts: 1545
Martyr Sep 01 2009, 03:40 AM
In his cold dead hands he holds the blade He was meant to be on his final crusade Before he left they all thought he was too afraid But now his final game has been played His trust was finally betrayed There was no way he ever could have evade But his life fortunately span over a decade He shall be sorely missed by the one he serenade But in his last breath he still tried to aid Unfortunately silenced by the blast of a grenade The pain he felt couldn't possibly be conveyed The memories of him shall surely fade No condolences were ever paid No one ever thought to have prayed His final wish was that peace could be made Though his voice was lost as he was laid And for this hero there was no parade His country just continued to invade Why did the continue this masquerade He took his life with that simple blade No ones piece was ever made His life could have been saved The people around him were just so depraved (Not my usual stuff) Amateur Poetry

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Emo Pictures - CyanideCinderella
CyanideCinderella
Posts: 282
Sep 01 2009, 01:05 PM
wow. epic. i had like images in my head. (:
Emo Pictures - Vybz
Vybz
Posts: 1466
Sep 01 2009, 01:44 PM
this is really good! it is your usual stuff = good
Emo Pictures - xXxChrisJWxXx
xXxChrisJWxXx
Posts: 1545
Sep 02 2009, 04:20 AM
thnx
Emo Pictures - xXeMoRaCeRXx
xXeMoRaCeRXx
Posts: 18346
Sep 03 2009, 04:13 PM
I really love the word 'epic' which was mentioned above and it's very fitting for a lot of your poems.
Emo Pictures - sullen_gnome
sullen_gnome
Posts: 182
Sep 10 2009, 05:44 PM
really great poem.. plus the way you used the word 'epic' great work! lol
Emo Pictures - xXxChrisJWxXx
xXxChrisJWxXx
Posts: 1545
Sep 12 2009, 10:16 AM
thanks everyone xx
Emo Pictures - CyanideCinderella
CyanideCinderella
Posts: 282
Sep 13 2009, 06:26 AM
Woo EPIC! (:

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