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Emo Pictures - xXxChrisJWxXx
xXxChrisJWxXx
Posts: 1546
Denied Sep 03 2009, 08:22 AM
The monstrous pains I feel inside, has my soul in divide, Once maybe my soul did glide, but now my feelings I just hide, I don't know how much longer I can survive, everyone around me just seems to connive, How is it that I have been left alive? What the hell? Why is it God choses me to survive? When surrounded I feel so unalive, I just feel in an eternal dive, For my life I shall not strive, Am I reaching my eternal demise? Can no one see my pain inside? Am I the only one using my eyes? My whole life I seem to have been ill advised, my end shall come as no surprise, Is death lurking behind in disguise? Am I really ready to say my goodbyes? Why does no one hear my cries? My heart just feels so despised, as if there is no love left inside, it's as if my soul has died, But with all my pain aside, I have to try to live and abide, I have to live with feelings denied, Is it that something was misimplied, or did I just miss something spread worldwide? If only I had the strength to run and hide, or to feel like I've never cried, or that somehow no one had lied, And yet I still stand outside, never shall friendship and I collide, This is not what I decide, I take but another stride, You see there was once love inside, but now people just try to ride, I just let it slide, leave them connive, But it just hurts inside, love denied,my soul divide, can no longer provide, washed away with the tide,

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Emo Pictures - sullen_gnome
sullen_gnome
Posts: 182
Sep 03 2009, 06:49 PM
its pretty cool! got it rhyming.. nice lol
Sep 05 2009, 12:10 PM
strange but cool, I mean, you write long phrases, I read one but I don't remember of what is in previous phrase, reading it can't see if it as rymes, only looking at the end of every phrase but you have nice rymes and, i dunno how to say this, it's something like: it has content (know what I mean?)
Emo Pictures - xXxChrisJWxXx
xXxChrisJWxXx
Posts: 1546
Sep 06 2009, 07:34 AM
I think I do, thanks x

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