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smile_of_chaos
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Parental control Jan 16 2010, 02:41 PM

Years and years, you got your way I was young, oh so innocent That innocence from upon you fed Upon the bed, my body froze in fear My childhood, just a game to you By day, your hand bled yestrdays welts From these scars, your strength refueled To the streets i fled, cause From day one, you had complete control Today, my head is all but cleansed of you Im a walking ghost of you terror Your destruction is the only remedy for me

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Vybz
Posts: 1466

Jan 16 2010, 04:13 PM

its well written. I like it *thumbs up*. it really expresses your malice towards parental control.

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smile_of_chaos
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Jan 16 2010, 05:32 PM

thanks for the feedback.. i was mainly thinking of my fathers ill habits when i wrote it

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Vybz
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Jan 16 2010, 07:12 PM

No problem at all always good to see some heartfelt poetry coming out. i figured it was a male figure, i don;t know i just related such feelings towards a man.

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xXeMoRaCeRXx
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Jan 17 2010, 09:03 AM

Another great poem I bet others can connect with. Thanks for sharing it.

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