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Emo Pictures - smile_of_chaos
smile_of_chaos
Posts: 14
Parental control Jan 16 2010, 02:41 PM
Years and years, you got your way I was young, oh so innocent That innocence from upon you fed Upon the bed, my body froze in fear My childhood, just a game to you By day, your hand bled yestrdays welts From these scars, your strength refueled To the streets i fled, cause From day one, you had complete control Today, my head is all but cleansed of you Im a walking ghost of you terror Your destruction is the only remedy for me

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Emo Pictures - Vybz
Vybz
Posts: 1466
Jan 16 2010, 04:13 PM
its well written. I like it *thumbs up*. it really expresses your malice towards parental control.
Emo Pictures - smile_of_chaos
smile_of_chaos
Posts: 14
Jan 16 2010, 05:32 PM
thanks for the feedback.. i was mainly thinking of my fathers ill habits when i wrote it
Emo Pictures - Vybz
Vybz
Posts: 1466
Jan 16 2010, 07:12 PM
No problem at all always good to see some heartfelt poetry coming out. i figured it was a male figure, i don;t know i just related such feelings towards a man.
Emo Pictures - xXeMoRaCeRXx
xXeMoRaCeRXx
Posts: 18362
Jan 17 2010, 09:03 AM
Another great poem I bet others can connect with. Thanks for sharing it.

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